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Not bad just one flaw, spoiler alert:

for a man whose mind had just been given limitless abilities I found it silly that he could not remember to pay back the loan shark(who would KILL HIM IF HE DID NOT PAY THE MONEY BACK) which causes all kinds of trouble for him.

Still liked it.

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